I have received feedback from peers and a small target audience and found that they agreed with a few of my points. The first thing everyone picked up on was the sound quailty of the video and this has now been resolved. Secondly I received ideas on the beginning of my film varying from shots of normal life that surrounding myself to the idea I went with of quick shots of titles and images. People also found that there were certain glitches in my video that needed fixing which I had picked up on watching it back with them such as pinnacle appearing through certain clips.
The majority of the feedback was positive and people seemed to like the video, they believed it was conventional for my genre and suited the song nicely. In response to their feedback I have changed a few things and fixed the few glitches that there was in my video. I will now post a second draft to my blog for further feedback and repsonse.